After reflected on our preliminary task and our final film i feel that our group has really improved our editing techniques and our camerawork techniques. It is goo that we have shown improvement as if we hadn't improved then it would have looked really bad on us as we would show poor technique.
We have specifically improved our match on action, as in the preliminary task we filmed a poor match on action which wasn't really a match on action. in our film we filmed one and we are pleased at how it has come out, it shows match on action as it is meant to be.
This scene is the over the shoulder shot which we used on the left in the preliminary task and on the right is our main film in our preliminary task. On the left we have shot the scene too far away from Sams shoulder which means that we are not giving the audience an insight into what Sam is seeing. Where as on the actual film on the right the way we shot the scene we give the audience a chance to understand my point of view. I believe that by correcting the mistake that we made in the preliminary task we have made the shot more engaging. By doing this we are trying to make the audience feel like they are in the room with us and seeing what Conor in seeing.




